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mothers instinct
well worn.
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username: AngelGone2Hell
A contest entry
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Comments
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Sometimes
We all feel that way. Where is the handle to hold on to at....mac
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Now this does make a bold statement in few words. I can see this. When the weariness takes hold of that peace that left once children arrived and have left, the peace wants to resurface. A good piece.
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Lots of emotion with so few words. Great write.
Alyssa
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Commentary
Short yet direct....
Full however understandable in the same mannerism of what the mother is thinking. Very creative approach -
This poem has alot of heart...
very cute idea
and well penned!!
thank you for entering!!
**kat -
Well penned with such meaning... x
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