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Alice Lost in Wonderland

Wooden cabinet
Frayed edges
Life’s habit,
Rough ledges
Guide rabbit
Down edges
Leading habit
Forgotten ridges
Create Bridges.

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  • candyhamilton
    February 15, 2008
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    i like this

    im not sure what it means to you butto me it maks me think of my mom lol


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    February 15, 2008
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    Intriguing...I feel it's like a puzzle...

  • The Inc
    February 14, 2008

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    Very different from the usual writes I
    encounter: great job! Thank you for
    sharing with us.

    ~The INC."


  • Dark Otter
    February 14, 2008
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    ineteresting

    Maybe "rough hedges". I'm big fan of Lewis Carroll. Different form.