Please never break it; my life won’t be worth living
Please never lose it or my world will fall apart
Please don’t give it back, else I will feel sad
Please keep it safe, forever close to you heart.
A contest entry
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Well, this is very heartfelt, quite straighforward, and it definitely expresses your feelings clearly. Sometimes poetry is good for that.
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This is good, but not amazing. Mayabe cause in my opinion its not of enough said in your few words used. Maybe making it longer will help.
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww sweet <3
Ashlea = Skilled
It's nice to see you writing again ^^
Eph
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Yay for you writing a poem, woo! I like it, well done, hehe.
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love this.
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Thanks you so much for the comment.
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