I still love you, now die.
Author notes
it's only six words!
A contest entry
- 6 Words by brightXdarkness.
600 points, ended March 10, 2008, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmmm most people would find it doesn't make sense, but considering I hate my ex this kind of words for me, so yeah I like it!
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Perfect for the way I've felt about my ex boyfriend. I wrote a poem that you may like to read that kind of goes with this poem. It's called sharing the hurt. I really like this poem though. It reminds me of how love can be so fatal. I personally don't like love at all. But This is really great. It is almost bulls eye on how I feel about him. wonderful write! Thank you for entering this poem into my contest, and the best of luck!!
Alex -
ahahhahah, this is powerful and emotional, great job, good luck in the contest!
stephanie
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