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Thoughts on Egypt






Your words,
the blows,
I know they are not meant.
I promise to try harder.


I know you love me.




©2008





Author notes

Written for the contest: Word Prompt: 20 words by Poetic Whisperer
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2391027?notheme=1

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  • Kuranya gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    I've been in this place where those words came from... sensationally written, well done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you all the best

    Karen


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    Powerful message here I enjoyed this take.
    Best of luck in the contest.


    Delila

    • Elrenia
      February 14, 2008
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      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

      rous


  • RandonBrandom
    February 14, 2008
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    whoa, g'luc

    • Elrenia
      February 14, 2008
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      Thank you. I appreciate your reading and commenting.

      rous

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