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My Valentine

Hugs and kisses,
candlelight dinners,
roses and bears
close dancing
moonlight shimmering

Romantic stares
eyes alight
lips smiling
hearts leaping

Valentines day
day of love
couples together
rings presented

This is the day to share
love and joy to be had
Why does is only come around once
I would love to have it everyday

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 29

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    I don't know how I missed this one, dear soul (who's greatly MISSED!!!), but I have to agree; I wish EVERY day were Valentine's Day
    I used to not celebrate it due to my Dad's passing the day before in 2006, but due to a very wonderful man, Greg, I now have reason to celebrate!
    We became engaged to be married this Valentine's Day, 2009
    This is a beautiful write, hon; wish you were around so we could talk more!
    Hugs to you where ever you are!
    Sandy


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    Lovely

    Tes,
    You have brought forth such a lovely piece that sends a beautiful message my sweet, dear friend

    "This is the day to share
    love and joy to be had
    Why does is only come around once
    I would love to have it everyday"

    OH YES, we should share and spread love everyday.
    Bravo!
    Throws confetti
    A masterpiece...words that says "Love"

    ~David~


  • StarEyes
    February 14, 2008

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    Tessa,

    You are right hon! It shouldn't be something that is only once a year, but a daily celebration of the ones we love! More people should feel that way!

    As always you did a great job on this one!!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Desire gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    Precious!!

    Gorgeous piece You have written from the Heart and it sure touches deep...can be felt within the Soul!!

    Love this!!!
    Keep that quill dancing Beautiful~~
    Happy Valentine's Day!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    February 13, 2008

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    I make everyday valentines day and we dont celebrate valentines day..well we do say happy valentines etc have a kiss and make brekkie for one another or something but no gifts...

    Valentines is to commercialized, and I hate it.
    You said the best thing in I would love to have it everyday but realise you can

    I am in the middle of writing a piece for my man, our special special from the heart thing is I write him apoem and he makes me a card and writes little I love this about you things in it hehehe

    This touched me and it shows how much you care and love
    that is the most important thing of all

    Happy Valentines Darl

    *Hug*
    Cin


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    I Agree,

    Everyday I feel should be Valentine's Day with that special someone who loves you, and visa-versa.. So true.. Thanks for sharing your thoughts here once again sweet soul.. it's always a pleasure reading you!

    Uncle Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 13, 2008

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    Gorgeous

    "Why does is only come around once
    I would love to have it everyday"

    Me too honey, me too

    Beautiful poem that is perfect for this day of extra kisses and cuddles


    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda

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