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Cigarettes and lies

Missing image
You hide beneath
  the smoke

hoping my eyes don't see
what they'll always remember ~

that dance in shadowy corners

retraced...

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Your prompt is: Denial

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    Gorgoues, this is a beautiful take on the prompt here... beautifully done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you all the best

    Karen


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    WHOA!!!! love the metaphore
    Excellent best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    wow i love your wording and the metaphors that you have used really creates a strong image well done and best of luck