Torn paper, shriveled to pieces,
You crumble me, then the irony releases,
Into the trash, as you said I should be,
Oh what a Valentine’s day for me.
Why on earth, did the words fade?
Sheet well penned now a whiter shade.
As erased I become to the world I known,
By the hands of you, only anger shown.
Many a days something decorates me,
Usually your ink, sending me misery.
Words of hate, scrawled across my body,
As your pen over flows, and you’re now cocky.
Tearing me away from a loose leaf notebook,
Not satisfied of your creation, your fist shook.
Spitting on me, your roll me up and toss me,
Oh what a Valentine’s Day to see.
As I hit the rim of the basket,
I am no longer alive, the trash my casket.
Crumpled and worn, erased and replaced,
Oh what a screwed up day, I am a Valentine misplaced.
Author notes
Okay well here ya go. Happy Fricken Valentines Day.
Yea well....*shrugs*
A contest entry
- Stupid Cupid by xblakxrosexremainsx.
700 points, ended March 9, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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well... it is a poem about a crumbled paper. sorry. . . but i didnt really feel with your poem, perhaps because i cant relate to it.i liked the rhyme though. thank you for sharing. -eleno
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I didn't really like the lines becaue it didn't sound so true it just sound like all it was rhymes but the titleinterested mee. I don't know i didn't see much passion much sincerity...perhas more vocabulary more creativity. A very nice poem for someoneto simply understaning. It was ok though but not really for me.
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i like it. It was a good write and captured the feelings of many on valentine's day.
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An enjoyable piece of poetry, to the world I known perhaps should be to the world I knew? A good poem.
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So not true it's not even funny. Love you...Scott
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Joy To The World...
You just had to come and pen one here didn't ya!
I love ya sweet Victorious, and I hope ya win something.
Much love to you and all that good stuff too!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo
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I would take a misplaced Valentine. I can use all the Valentines I can get. I doubt I would get that many. I hope you have a nice Valentine's Day.
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