In the ethereal dimensions,
the souls hang in anticipation.
Awaiting their appointment to
the sublime terra firma that
hover and spin beneath
in neverending revolutions
as the orb of light looks down.
A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE PROMPT by penman.
525 points, ended February 14, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hey this is exceptional here
Very unique and thought provoking I loved it
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Niaish
I'm glad everyone liked my write!
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Great response to the picture prompt, in line with my thoughts that souls move through lives and move on in a cycle that is never-ending. And always, the light is above.
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an amazing poetic response to the picture prompt ... your verse is somehow a combination of surrealism and esoterism ... truly wonderful ...
maa
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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