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Smokescreen.

This painful mass,
its web of roots
adhering to my lungs,
will not defeat me,
Flick, flame, smoke, inhale,
ahhhhh!

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    This made me smile even though it is a serious subject, well written, I like this

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you all the best

    Karen


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    WOW very original take. with a powerful message. Well done and best of luck in the contest.


    Delila