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I love the ZOO

Roses are red violets are blue

i love the zoo

and so do you

raw-ing tigers

barking dingoes

cuddly koalas

kangaroo's jumping up

high of the ground

and

swimming fishies

 

A contest entry

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  • takemypainaway
    February 22, 2008

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    I still dont see the options in your notes

    or how this fits...

    i do feel that this is a cute poem

    i just dont think it fits but anyway

    thank you for entering the contest...

    --kat

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    I love the zoo too, even though it's been years since I've been to one. I hope whenever you go to the zoo you have a great time. Great poem.
    Brian

  • takemypainaway
    February 13, 2008
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    can you please put you options in your notes!!