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Wondering

There's so much I could say
but nothing near the truth.
Honoring my heart's desire
is far too unrealistic.
Too many times I've been told
that this is real, as honest
as pure-
only to be let down,
or rather knocked down,
to a state of miserable reality.
My hope was-
                has been to breathe-
to finally enjoy life's blessed gift.
Cut short.
You say you have the same dream-
yet do nothing to help me reach it
                                                                    with you.
You leave me-
wondering-
sighing as I continue waiting hopelessly,
for an answer that may never exist.

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  • xGuitarxHerox
    February 13, 2008

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    that was really good

    I know exactly were you are coming from, i really like your poem and think this is a great poem, keep up the good work