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Calluses



Suffering in unheard silence
brings less seen pain than
breaking bleeding blisters.




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Prompt:: "Denial"

A contest entry

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  • PerfectImperfection
    February 17, 2008

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    Such depth... *sigh* You have such a way with words, and even in so few - you have an incredible depth. Sad but true, great write!


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    I like this piece, and it is true it is less pain... well done on a great piece here

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you all the best

    Karen


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    WOW your take is so original... great metaphore.
    Well done and best of luck in the contest.


    Delila


  • Tattboyspet
    February 14, 2008

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    You have taken this prompt to a new level, despite the fact that these 12 words are rather disturbing ... no matter how far one runs, the silence will always follow


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 13, 2008
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    OMG
    This is a statement of true..
    well written.

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