emotional pain
builds up from within
deception and lies
from my closest kin
“friends” you say?
don’t make me laugh
what a joke
a load of krap
time and time again
you’ve deceived me
you’ve broken my trust
well, you just wait and see
your ass is mine
karma’s a bitch
i’m out for revenge now
the tides have switched
you better be careful
better watch your back
for more bite than bark
is what you lack
although you’ve caused harm already
and the damage is done
it’s now my turn
to have some fun
i’ll play with your emotions
like you did to me
i’ll screw with your mind
we’ll have fun, you’ll see
who’s laughin now bitch?
thought you were funny, didn’t you?
well it’s my turn now
and you don’t have a clue
i’ve got plans for you
just wait and see
you won’t think it’s so funny
when it’s happening to you and not me
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
Good!
This makes me feel something…
I read this on 1st of April, I too read this several times very slowly to capture every emotion and every word that painted pictures in my head, my mind made me read this all over again and again…
If this is true I feel This cycle of revenge should not be continued; maybe one day you’ll think you wasted your time on revenge after revenge (I mean when you’ll take revenge on him he’ll probably take revenge on you and vice versa this may continue for life ) instead of doing something else , I'm not saying forgive this person either
But who I am to speak when you know what’s good for you.
This was very good
A lot of emotions in it
I’ll give you 3 of these, you deserve that.
-
i wounder who this is about?...anywhy i loved it very strongly written and it showed your emotions very well great write like always
-
The person who this is for... man I would hate to be them. Careful not to draw blood if you bite. never know where they've been LOL great poem , I dont have to tell you to keep writing you already know what I think. -Poet-
Adding your comment:
