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Let Me Have Tonight

Yesterday you were lost forever.
Today the pain was worse,
so let me have tonight
because denial is your breath.

A contest entry

What about your own yesterdays?

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    Well this is a lovely take on the prompt here, you have much beauty in these words, even if it is sad beauty

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you all the best

    Karen


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    To bad ther isnt a mint for denial breath.
    Hehe J/K I like this alot... Best of luck to you in the contest.


    Delila