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On The Exhale



It's all just


moments





and this is the last one.






Author notes

My "Famous Last Words".
I prefer the song.

A contest entry

Honesty would be lovely

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    I thought it said i'm not it's but either way, wow, how simple and stunning. Something beautiful and beautiful in its own right, not caressed with scents of death.

    Thanks for entering,


  • February Moon gold member
    February 15, 2008
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    Loved it.


  • Tattboyspet
    February 14, 2008

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    sheesh! talk about dripping with negativity?!
    lol - nice 'last words' nonetheless my friend


    • Exodus gold member
      February 14, 2008

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      Aww I don't think it's necessarily negative...
      If you think of everything as moments you're more likely to remember them, think of them as special.