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Robbed

Just when i though
things were looking up,
They all came down
like falling rain.

Maybe there was a chance
But who ever knew?
You were stolen from me,
Before I got a chance
To make you mine.

He picks you up
Taking you away.
I fall to my knees
without a word to say.

Why did this happen?
Why to me?
Will I ever get the chance,
To bring you back to me?

Nice guys always finish last.
Why? Do they not deserve first?
I will take you back,
no matter what it takes.

Just you wait Ill come
And bring you back to me.

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  • Shade Aurelia
    February 14

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    Love is the most complicated of emotions. This is full of the pain you feel. I hope whoever the girl is sees that you're really the guy for her.

    Hope things work for you.

    Shade

    • Theres not really a girl yet just more of a though going through my head at that point in time. But now im more focused on Tattoos theey are amazing after the one today I love them.

  • unperfectlyperfect
    February 13

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    You can tell this comes from the heart. I hope that things work out but remember all things happen for a reason.

  • Dragon Aleph
    February 13

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    I know this one comes from your heart my friend. May you attain what you seek.

    The only spelling error I picked up on was finich should be an s instead of a c

    • Thanks Chan for actually reading and leaving a comment you have been changing alot of things about you lately the way you do things. But I fixed. Oh yeah maybe its a new shampoo or new TP. Who knows j/k
      ~Count Crimson Maryian~
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