Forsaken love
barbed rose thorns
spilling affections
losing life.
Longing
for
you
I lost myself.
A contest entry
- Short and powerful by The Kake Show.
1068 points, ended February 16, 2008, 26 entries
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Hood Winked!!
Yes many have walked this journey more than once and felt the sting of 'barbed rose thorns' the beauty and the pain of love. You capture the emotional essence when love is not the game this time ...so we keep looking .... the power of this poem shows how much can be said in so few words. thank you for the read.
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ah love, it can be a trap at times, it entices us and we follow the trails then we mourn, a good poem, good imagery.
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its really cliche and that really overpowers the message
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I like this one. Very devistating words in a powerful wrapper
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