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Warped Stages

 

 

 

paper limbs slip

into contorted ballets;

where shadows dance
on contoured lines.

the bodies bend

perpetually.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Second prompt.
Image by HooverFlagIt at deviantart.com

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Comments

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  • Friday gold member
    February 14

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    & again for good measure.
    I don't know how you do it, but every piece by you is better than the last.
    I'm not at all surprised by the gold


  • Cerulean gold member
    February 13

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    Congrats on the gold, adorable one.
    So deserved for this poem.


  • whispernthedark silver member
    February 13

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    congrats on the gold..wonderful take on the prompt and most deserving..



  • Talloaks silver member
    February 13
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    Good write


  • Midnight-x-Rose silver member
    February 13
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    I really like this take. It's very beautiful and unique. Thanks so much for entering.

  • Midnight-x-Rose silver member
    February 13

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    prompts up...
    didn't know whether you knew that or not.
    Will wait 2 minutes if you are wanting to finish it.
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