paper limbs slip
into contorted ballets;
where shadows dance
on contoured lines.
the bodies bend
perpetually.
Author notes
Second prompt.
Image by HooverFlagIt at deviantart.com
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie - 11 poets by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended February 13, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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& again for good measure.
I don't know how you do it, but every piece by you is better than the last.
I'm not at all surprised by the gold
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Congrats on the gold, adorable one.
So deserved for this poem.
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congrats on the gold..wonderful take on the prompt and most deserving..
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Good write
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I really like this take. It's very beautiful and unique. Thanks so much for entering.
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prompts up...
didn't know whether you knew that or not.
Will wait 2 minutes if you are wanting to finish it.
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Done.
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