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the siren in the sea

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the siren in the sea
beckons me
her nightsong incapable
of being ignored

mere mortals
think they can contain her
but her song is too strong
decibels beyond comprehension


apprehension
sets in
true love must be realized

the siren in the sea
has taken complete control
over me


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  • Xx Luna xX
    February 18, 2008
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    Wow. Well done! I love this.