Hearing a cry in the darkness,
awakening the senses,
let us shrug off all grandeur,
lose false pretenses.
Having but one life to live
most choose to be hollow
using all that they can,
forsake those who must follow,
we have not an answer to these arguments,
Call ourselves caring parents?
Author notes
51+3 title.
A contest entry
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650 points, ended March 12, 2008, 41 entries
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Comments
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I like this very much so,
However the stanza is a bit ackward, and if this was to actually go to print, I could not sue " bullshit " in it, it will not hurt your chances in the contest, but would for publishing, I will reread all entries again before the end of the contest. Thank you for the entry and good luck.
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