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Standing in the Garden

An autumn wind
a humble bend
I watch you fall way
The rose died
no one waves goodbye
a token of love decays

Was it meant to be?
Wiling to give it's all
so easily
Bends until it breaks?
What's the point in breathing?
Something so short
is fleeting
does it really deserve its fate?

It's a blink of an eye
time has done nothing but blind
I could have sworn
this was a garden.











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  • Purush
    February 14, 2008
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    all the best

    good verse
    wish you all the best