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Forget

I just want to see the flowers
that blow on the banks Lethe
[beautiful opium poppies]
and sip its sweet oblivion.

I'm so tired.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Naridill
    February 17, 2008

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    Sad and lamenting - the increasing beautiful and yet the lack of care but still images in mind. You got a sense for sorrow here.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Ryno
    February 17, 2008
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    Whoa.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 13, 2008
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    Aww that was totally beautiful!!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    wow your 13 words stun me they are so unique yet so deep and beautifully written much better than my simple one lol