I turn and walk away
as I do I slowly say
when will I be able to say
things have never been this good
Now I see all the lies
how you cheated, why I cried
and every day I die inside.
Will it ever be like it should?
I have seen all the times
people hurt by stupid lines
and never do they see in time
things will never be like they should
My pain shields my friends
they find happiness through my dead ends
all the while my life tends
to not be all that good
A contest entry
- Just How Bad Is It...? by Laura-Critchley.
1200 points, ended February 28, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BROKEN HEARTED by DAMSELx.
300 points, ended March 13, 2008, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - B/r/e/a/k.my.♥Heart♥ by BrokenDawn.
600 points, ended March 13, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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Goodluck in my contest! This is really good! Bravo!
~dawn♥ -
Such a sad, almost final poem. Thank you so much for entering it into my contest.
I wish you the best of luck in everything you do and in the other contests you have entered.
Take care, Laura.
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