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Within a Universe of Thought

Why would a sculptor have a work of art
with out a solid base?
The passion within his heart
and a masterpiece in mind.

We are all masterpieces in progress.
on our journey to remember the forgotten
The beauty to discover beneath the surface.

Within this universe of thought
We must come back to our foundation,
as we create this little work of art
as we know it, called life.


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  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    February 18, 2008
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    This was a very contemplative piece. It made me reflect back on a lot of things in my life, and how sometimes (as cliche as it sounds) I tend to look over the small things that matter the most. The ending was pretty good too; wrapped it all up nicely.
    Thank you for entering, and good luck
    Jeanette*~