Dear God do you listen,
When I pray you my prayer?
‘Cos I’m starting to wonder,
Do you really care?
Dear God when I ask you,
For peace in my life,
Why do you shatter my hopes,
With the force of a knife?
Dear God I have asked you,
On many a time,
What’s the point of a poem,
With no rhythm or rhyme?
When I ask you these questions,
That you seem to ignore,
I’m starting to wonder, God,
What are you for?
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Not an uncommon prayer, but finely and uncommonly expressed in this little poem! bravo!
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hmm...sorry, don't really know what to say...
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Honestly I found some of the rhyming a little forced and cliche. And your message... well I am not one to preach. I'm not a religious person by any means. However I do believe in God. And I think that when you truly open your heart and listen He is there... because I didn't understand that until I had an experience like that myself and since then, no one can tell me otherwise... if you really so want to hear Him, you will.
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well done! direct fate.....thanks for sharing .. I'm speechless
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This is a nice write. You know the saying...everything happens for a reason. But I wonder the same thing sometimes. Good write though.
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This is a great poem.
This is one of the best poems I have read hear on AP
Great job
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