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Be Mine

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
And baby
I need you!

I know
This cheesey little poem
Won't please you so

I sent you
A dozen roses
Pink,
White, and red ones too.

If only you knew
How special you are.
Then perhaps
You'd want me too.

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BE MINE!!!!!!!! ♥

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  • Kelli Marie
    February 15, 2008

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    A beautiful job you have done here. Congratulations on your bronze trophy. Well deserved. My favorite rose is yellow. They mean a lot to me, especially if they come from a certain someone, and just one is perfect.
    Kelli


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    Cheesy can be pleasing when it comes to love no matter what type it is. I enjoyed the "orange cheetah poem." Good luck in the contest.

    Ted E


  • lesbian-in-love
    February 13, 2008

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    Cheesy but sweet. So Pink, White and Red roses couldn't decide what color. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for entering into my contest and good luck.