Behold the beautiful wooden box
Within it, is a faded suicide note
Underneath, lies a knife
Your blood remains on the blade forever
But did you really mean to leave it there
Did you really mean to leave me alone
I've cried over you for so long
Now it's time to meet once more
I set my suicide note with yours
And I take the knife in my hand
I can still hear your voice, like a haunting mellody
Did you really mean to leave me
I slice through the veins in my wrist
Then I set the knife back in the box
And leave it in the hollow tree
As I lie on your grave and cry one last time
I have become so weak
I can hardly breathe now
Then I hear your soft voice
Telling me it's okay to close my eyes now
I whisper to you I'm sorry I waited so long
As I close my eyes to your deadly kiss
Now we're together again
And this time nothing shall ever part us
Behold the beautiful wooden box
Within it, are two faded suicied notes
Underneath, lie two halves of two broken hearts
Which death has stiched together
To make our love whole again
Our one heart,
Half yours and half mine
Author notes
'MCR'
A contest entry
- ...Suicide (cutting)... by xXsoulxcollectorXx.
450 points, ended February 28, 2008, 49 entries
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Honorable mention
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This was feeing amazing.Great write. Just makes death seem so romantic (whichi i believe it is). absolutely heartwrenching and beautiful. BEst of luck in the contest
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awesome
so romantic w/ love and death together. she loved him so much that she commited suicide for him. just like he killed himself. i kno if i killed myself my bf would kill himself and vice versa. this was awesome! -
Which death has stiched together
To make our love whole again
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This is really intense. I love the story, how you tell a tale. If you died, I would miss your poetry. It is so much like my thoughts...
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that was a wicked dealy write, nontheless, i hope your not feeling this way because suicide is not the answer
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