Did you ever have one of those days,
When nothing went your way?
Things for no reason would just go wrong,
And you'd feel like crying all day long.
One moment you think you have your thoughts sorted out,
But the very next moment you're shaded with doubt.
You can't even understand your own thinking,
No matter that the thoughts are in your mind spinning.
You don't know how you feel about one thing,
So much that your mind with confusement'll ring.
You just want to end the day right at that moment,
'Cause all you'll ever do is look back on this day and lament.
On days like these when you feel like you're going to drop,
You just have to sit down, think, and stop.
And no matter what happened in the day whole,
Remember that God is always in control.
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I like it. Especially the ending. I like your line 'but the very next moment your shaded with doubt'. Good job.
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That was really wonderful. I was just getting sad, remembering all the really "rough" days I've had, but then the last line just snapped my self-pity. It made me smile and remember not to try to control things, because that's usually what makes me sad.
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