The unborn busting forth from the binds of the womb,
seeking out that first breath, ah the lust of life.
Author notes
Lust can be many things, it can be ugly, it can be good and it can be neccessary.
A contest entry
- Word Prompt: 20 words by Kuranya.
375 points, ended February 14, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What about your own yesterdays?
Comments
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Lust can definately be a lot of things, I like the outside the box thinking you have on this piece, well done
Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck
Karen -
That's pretty deep... I like your take on the word prompt... You said a lot with few words.
Nicely done good luck.


