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Valentine's Love

Your warmth beauty grace and touch
My darling I love you so much
Throughout this long journey I see
There’s just you and me for eternity
When I wake up each morning filled with love
I realize that you were sent to me from above
All these years that we have been together
I feel the realms of destiny forever
When I look at you I see
A part of you and a part of me
In this life of ours we will always be free
In my mind and in my heart
I know that we will never be apart
From ocean to ocean and sea to sea
I will love you for all of eternity

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  • celadia
    February 22, 2008

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    I love the gush of emotion in this piece but I did wonder at the statement that you would always be free, it didn't seem to fit really well, but other than that, it was really touching and beautiful.


  • zhaniswolf
    February 21, 2008

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    I really hope you showed this to your wife...

    Beautiful poem, Dad.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    My this love lasts longer than forever! This was so beautiful and such a lovely heart warming piece to read.

    May the both of you enjoy a lovely Valentines day!

    ♥Becks