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a Kiss

It was only a kiss
That sent me into pure bliss
His lips were oh so sweet
Such that candy was beat
My heart beat fast as if about to explode
'Kiss me again' my heart implored
I felt as if I was in a dream
His eyes looking at me like two beautiful beams
He took my hand in his
And gave me yet another kiss
I was flying high above the clouds
When in his arms I was bound
As he looked into my eyes
I felt like I would die
I could not explain how all this joy
Would come about for this simple boy
And with his kiss
I know only this
That the heartach I had is now curerd
With the love that he's given me that's pure. 

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  • Lilith-Eve
    June 9, 2008
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    i love this poem, it's very good


  • second-born
    February 14, 2008

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    This is such a very lovely poem...I felt your sincerity of your piece...most of us really expect this kind of 'sweet love story' but who knows...maybe someday it will happen...to you (but I really hope it does)


  • sonata
    February 13, 2008

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    Good poem. it's kind of dreamy. and then again it was only a dream so it fits. if only it would be like this in real life.


  • natalie92493
    February 13, 2008

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    I don't think thats how it happens, not really.
    Maybe for some people.
    It's never that simple for me.
    I was kind of disappointed when I read your note, about how it didn't really happen. Well, it happened in your mind.


    • PinUpLovesGreaser
      February 13, 2008
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      it kind of happened... but not really, I ended up breaking his heart because my heart was never really mended... so I was still in love and sad over my ex. I feel really bad, I might have actuall been happy with him, if i wasnt so dumb.

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