Look at what you've done now,
Left me dead, discarded
But you probably dont even know how.
Leaving me torn open, unguarded.
You took everything of me,
My mind is broken,hollow
But even still I plea
My heart, should I follow?
A contest entry
- He Hurt Me, I Love Him by Blooming Poet.
315 points, ended February 20, 2008, 11 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm sure many can relate to this write. I enjoyed it and thanks for your entry and good luck!
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A lot said in a few words--Very honest and sincere!
Good luck in the contest!
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Good, entry. Wait a second your 15 this is aan amazing entry I could never write like this at 15
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love the worsd they flow good i think
the poem its self was amazing,
i wish yu the best in the cntest and much love
endless-lover
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