Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Humanoid

Born of Flesh
Modified by Electrolitic fusion
Computational Centrific Neurotexix
I am to exist as a lifeform
A timespan of 100years
So Far...

I have seen the obliteration of man
Through violent and illogical war
Now I exist and survive
My Outer skin ooozes teflon fluid
Internal metallicoid skeletal/Muscular system
I live...

I walked an earth in darkness for many years
Lived amongst its shadow shades
Now the clouds have parted
I have felt a slight warmth around me
Small creatures have begun to appear again
Searching memory...

Emotion has evolved from pure reason/logic
I have felt a need for like beings
I ache inside at this now barren world
A proNeuclear cesspool created by man the maniac
Pure destruction exists on an abandond planet
I am still alone...

Author notes

Antipodi....Human Behavior

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Beating gold member
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is very well written! I love the title, and I felt that the last stanza spoke with so much strength and vulnerable feelings... somehow mixed together. Very well done!