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Tantilizing Blue Eyes (Triolet)

Tantilizing blue eyes
Gazing intently at me
What does her gaze disguise
Tantilizing blue eyes
Am I in for a sweet surprize
Will my loved one she be
Tantilizing blue eyes
Gazing intently at me.

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  • Naridill gold member
    March 2, 2008
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    Simple rhyme but nice flow - thanks for entering