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Valentines Day

I pray and I pray
for something to happen
on Valentines Day
but my luck isn't like others
who all have lovers
on Valentines Day
I will be alone
staying at home
because there is no
reason for me to go out
I do not doubt that I will pout
because since the 5th grade
I have been waiting for that someone to hold
on Valentines Day
all the love in the air
just makes me sadder
but it doesn't matter because
after all its just me
all alone on Valentines Day

Hey Ya'll Tell me what ya think please...Thank You

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  • Tarja
    February 13, 2008

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    I honestly think that the rhyming was a little too forced and that this was just really cliche.

    TYPOS:

    for something to happoen
    but it doesn't matter becaue