I look to you
for comfort,
guidance,
whatever the
noun of the day is
emotionally drawn
to your lead
I wilt in your presence
and pray for acceptance
I find myself
a willing participant
in your game,
I feign shock,
even repulsion,
but am thrilled
by the proposition
my selection obtains...
Author notes
picture prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie And Possible publishing. by creationsfromheart.
650 points, ended March 12, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oooooh I love your take on the prompt, best of luck!
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This is really good. wonderful take on the prompt - best of luck to you hun
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this is a very good write, I would prefer the stanzas to be the same as the 2 listed on the contest page, as if they are chosen to go in a book that is how they will go, but love the words either way best of luck in the contest and I will be reading again before final judging
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emotionally drawn
to your lead
I wilt in your presence
and pray for acceptance
words i feel that i can relate to and i am sure many can for we surrender alot to be with the one we love. well done with this
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