Mirror
The merciless reflection whispers
"imperfect"
High school
Eyes vicious, penetrating
"imperfect"
Clothing
Humiliating stumble toward plus size
"imperfect"
Him
Unrelenting love
Compassionate embrace
Sincerely relays the reality
Undeniably Perfect
Word Prompt
Comments
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remarkable
There was so much truth and emotion in this poem, I really loved it!
The way some people perceive themselves is downright cruel. It's scary and sad how girl especially think they are ugly and try so hard to make up for that. Everyone has beauty inside and outside! But how can they see it if they don't look for it?
Your poem was lovely, it really spoke to me.
You will be able to reach out to a lottt of people, especially teens, with your writing! Awesome job!
<3
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Such a profound piece of writing...I love the way you formed this poem and it has such a personal feel to it...sweety, nobody's perfect, it's a hollywood myth...it is all about how we love ourself, and know God loves us...
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Oh this is a great piece here, you have captured so much with these few words you had to work with, well done
Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you every luck
Karen
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