Some people say "Love is a big illusion
And life is a smart confusion"
But I say LOVE is many things
That fills our heart and makes it sing
Love is a feeling inside the heart
Love is a look when a tear departs
Love is pleasure one gives so free
Love is an answer from you to me
Love can be shown with a tender Rose
Life isn't confused when one knows
That someone loves you and really cares
Offers a hand and a life that shares
Children and parents, work that brings
All together in harmony that loudly rings
Everyone has their own point of view
Love is defined by a heart that's true
Author notes
I am feeling better now, so I thought I would try to pen something. Hope this is OK
A contest entry
- Love is a big illusion and Life is a smart confusion by Purush.
550 points, ended February 27, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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Thank You Purush
I do so appreciate the Bronze trophy for my poem in your contest. It was my pleasure to enter your contest. -
Good write.
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all the best
"Love is defined by a heart that's true"
very nice feeling
all the best in the contest -
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spell check
"Love is a big illision"
spell check please! -
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Thanks Purush
I made the correction. I did use the check spelling after writing the poem before I submitted. I didn't use the spell check
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Lovely~
Thanks for sharing such an inspirational piece!
I wish you all the best within the contest.
A pleasure reading you, always!
Be blessed, Timothy x
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Thank You Tim
Always glad to hear your comments. i appreciate them. Hope everything is OK with you.
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