Candle lit dinners of rendered romance
Tracing tunes, tapping piano keys praise
Empty eyes encountered, hopes golden glance
Snapshot moments of sunny yesterdays
Gibberish hymns became genuine tones
On quests to sing our hearts of harmony
Your indigo eyes venture those unknowns
As you inspire my love poetry
There's photographs to pause mere memories
Know darling dear my verses dipped in rhyme
Are etched to grasp your heart eternally
Beyond holidays treasured Valentine
So place your hands upon my hopeful heart
For every day I fall in love anew
Be my Valentine, till death do us part
Earth or Heaven, I'll always be with you
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May each day bring you a dose of love~
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This is quite lovely, I dont know many men who are poets, although being on here I am beginning to get to know quiet a few!
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wow your a wonderful romance/love
writer. i enjoy reading the happiness
it brings to the readers
great work ^^
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a very loving piece dad.
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How beautifully romantic your words of love are, dear sir. You always touch my heart with your lovely words and make me remember the true beauty of love. May you always be blessed by it in your life.
Love,
mystic
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AWW!
Such a beautiful and truly heart warming piece of devotion... You weave sincerity in lovely shades of amorous reflection. *sigh*
Excellent write my dear!
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aww..
i loved that poem
the very last line i just loved
super sweet,great poem dad love lots,xoxo -
Beautiful!!
Certainly Weavings of Love to touch the Heart and leave treasures behind
Wonderful piece penned!!
The last line grabs~~
Just Love this...
Thank You for Your Generous comment on my work-
also Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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"So place your hands upon my hopeful heart
For every day I fall in love anew
Be my Valentine, till death do us part
Earth or Heaven, I'll always be with you"
sincere & beautiful...a lovely poem
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This poem is beautiful and so pure - it comes directlty from your heart.. the love is driping from your words.. lovely valentine dedication.. keep writing my dear friend
and best of luck inthe contest..
Love, Lonely
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great poem
good luck!
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My dearest Thank you for showing this to me - I love your romantic golden heart for you shine in infinite hearts divine and blessed wonder. from my heart to yours I praise you with open arms of wondrous glory. Just as with all your inspirational and incredible writes this too brought me to tears for I know and have seen the the love that exudes from your soul for your family and all around you. awesome though i wouldnt find anything less from you many wonderful and loving blessings always xxxxxx
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So sweet and romantic and well written too ! I truly enjoyed this dance of a piece. Happy V - Day. Hopeless romantics reign on this day. Blessings.d
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This is a awesome poem!!! i loved it!!
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breathless
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I DO THINK THAT THIS POEM IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POEM THAT YOU HAVE WROTE. I LOVE EVERY WORD OF IT.IT GAVE ME SUCH A GOOD FEELING READING IT.I HOPE THAT YOU WILL HAVE A REALLY GREAT DAY THANK YOU FOR SHAREING IT
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I love it...smiles...such wonderful and loving words you weave my dear brother...beautiful imagery...
Peace and many blessings
~A~
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excellent..
emotional and visual. Well crafted rhymes..good job
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Beautiful
Quite a lovely valentine poem for someone Timothy.
Jim
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awwww Tim this is lovely as Valentines Day is for sharing true caring hearts as you so willingly do. good luck in her contest sweet friend..
Moons
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awwww this is so full of passion and affection i absolutly love the flow and imagery in your write aswell as the emotion wel done hun
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So sweet...so full of adoration and passion. My dear brother, this is such a perfect gift of words! She will LOVE this. Every line drips with purest love, all enduring and eternal. What a beautiful penning, dear man. Your heart truly shines in this one!! Love you Brother-O-Mine. Hope you and yours have an absolutely wondrous Valentines Day! Love ya!!
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