As I sit in this car,
driving without thought;
I think of the days we once spent together.
Even though tears seem to blind me,
I continue on,
swearing on my honor and pride,
I will forget you by the time I arrive at home.
I won't be able to see your face when I close my eyes,
those strong coal eyes that are hard,
yet soft at the same time...
I won't feel your shoulder length hair against my cheek,
or feel those sweet lips on mine.
I'll forget you, my love,
because I can't do anything else,
while saving my heart at the same time...
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A contest entry
- Push me over the edge....or pull me back in! by Whyitt U.
6000 points, ended February 15, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
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i like that poem its so AWESOME!!!
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I like.
I think you summed it up well in the last lines that you wrote. While saving my heart at the same time. -
This is amazing!! I loved all of it...the flow...the wording...the imagery...the feeling and emotion, well done!! And the last three lines are devastingly gorgeous.
Wyatt
xxx
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