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why me?????????

i dont think this world understands me or neither does this girl
can a guy not ask for forgiveness from a girl whom he cares so much about without anybody threatening him
i told everybody that i screwed up before with her but i promise i have changed
they must not know how hard it is to want and NEVER be able to have
it is the feeling of my heart getting stomped on and put back into my chest
you see i would leave her alone but how could when she is all i think about
and yea i have tried to move on but u dont understand how hard it is
all i can do is picture her face and remember the good times we had back then
and if only now was like it was back then before i got stupid and made that horrible mistake i would be the happiest man alive and never ask god for anything else
so my final question is WHY ME?

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Written November 21st, 2003

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  • Sonreigh
    November 22, 2003
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    I'm sorry for the loss, and the mistake. It truly was one, and all humans make them. Your buddy Alonzonu, I had a few choice words for him. I'm sorry that you recieved that. He should not have said such things to you. I think your work is brillant, to be perfect is to be drab and no one wants that.


  • alonzonu
    November 21, 2003
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    why you? its because you fuckin hit her you dumb ass. what the fuck were you thinkin? and you got your ass beat that is funny, lol,lol,lol,lol.
    ~Alonzo~