-You don’t know what is within,
inside,
behind my eyes
of promised sensual misery.
And yet you moooon over
potential smiles,
and velvet smooth surprised
superficial lies
about whom you and I
will soon,
never,
be.
- Like a commercial fiend
I will sway my hips
The way you tune those lips
To my every desire
Jewels
Yes?
Money
That too?
Oh, yes.
Too many
Trivial,
expensive toys
I have yet to take
And so I play
To win
Buy me the world
And you’ve got my
My Raven black hair
to breeze through your
clumsy,
eager fingers
and my silken petite sweet
to heat your sheets
-So long as you buy
the diamond ice,
dangling from an ear draped in ravens strands:
-So long as you buy the stars for my wrist
and the planets for my gown:
-So long as you buy the glitter of rubies
to lotion my skin:
I will stand
Before the horizon,
Within mysterious flow.
And within my bright eyes,
you will never know…
that deep down,
I hate everything about you
A contest entry
- The crazy picture prompt points give-a-way! by volcaniclastic.
2000 points, ended March 2, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
No idea what this is... what do you take from it?
Comments
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End line was very 'Three days grace' - thanks for entering
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Oh my God ...
this is hilarious. I cracked up. You're a bad, bad girl.
You left out an "o" here:
To(o) many
Trivial,
but otherwise you did a bang up job with this. I needed a laugh today, and now I actually feel better than I did a few minutes ago.
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Gak
You know, that is always how it is for me! >__< It doesnt matter what I write, the big words are fine. Give me a word like I dont know... determination and I spell it just fine-- give me a word like "you" or "The" and "too"-- Even "she" "he" "her" and I spell it wrong. *Smirks*
Anywho-- I am very glad you enjoyed my poem. ^__^ it was fun writing... almost too much fun... I'm kinda jealous... of her...
But I'm totally not a golddigger so yah!
^__~'
Glad I made your day better honey. That is what writing is all about. Makin' ya feel good (or bad... but I prefer good!)
Have a great one!!
Lady
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