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once more will kill me

I have been hurt so many times
Once more will kill me
A year ago i promised myself
To not open my heart to anyone
But i broke my promise
When i met you...
I just hope you don't destroy me
I pray to God
That I did not made a mistake
On trusting you...
...
Something inside tells me i didn't

Please tell me what you think

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  • Neha Kaushik
    March 22, 2008

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    Hi
    I must say a unique perception you've portrayed here, very sad and painful.. a good read, beautifully expressed with good flow and rythm. Juz loved the way your poem proceeds.......


  • Rompf
    February 14, 2008
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    wow sad poem but it reminds me of a friend... nice poem