Thoughts momentarily misplaced
Cause misconceptions.
Tranquil contemplation is essential
Amongst those who offer no scrutiny.
The creatures of the natural world
Bid only serenity below the forest canopy.
Where compassionate diffused lighting
And subtle mists
Cause cryptic internal struggles
To be silenced at last.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired. [furiae] by Naridill.
410 points, ended February 13, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this really did the picture justice...I went to the contest page and checked out the photo...nicley done...
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Nice ending - fluent and final. A gripping tale beautifully penned.
Thanks for entering,
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