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beauty raining down

weeping willow

laughing sun

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  • sheltered
    May 3, 2008
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    I read this after commenting on a previous haiku and think it is perfect... lol. Awesome in fact.


  • haikumonk gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    Hi... thanks for entering. Please reduce your haiku to 12 syllables or less.... refer to the contest guide for more information. It's ok to revise until we close the contest. Thanks. Don