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Porcelain skin
with his touch,
bleeds
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Author notes
if ya want this pic u have to ask this lady.... mojave moon
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A contest entry
- 6 Words by brightXdarkness.
600 points, ended March 10, 2008, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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strong words
and even more powerful images
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This is ever so haunting... I want to cry when you write it like this... as it's true, it's how many people lose all they had that was beautiful and dear. Karl and my sister and Sherie all took a different part of my innocence, but I know each one made me bleed sometime, either on the inside or out. Wonderfully put in only 6 words - magnificent.
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wow, I liked this. I love how this poem goes along so much with the poem, and how I am able to relate. "with his touch, bleeds." After a night like the one I had tonight, it makes me want to cry reading those words. Even this weekend really, but that's another story. This may sound really weird, but this poem makes me want to find this person with porcelain skin and save her from this stupid boy who will one day hurt her. I love it because this can be taken so many ways. There are so many ways you can lose your innocence. Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!!
Alex -
awww love the pic, and love the poem, bravo on each..well finding the pic, and writting the pome =P lol.
best of luck in the contest
stephanie =) -
thanks for the crdit, u seem to like photomanip. ?
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... and I thought mine was depressing,
where the hell did this come from,
what happened to "i'm too shy"
cool!
i like that you're breaking down some of those walls ... glad I can be of help, seem to do that to people
Very strong... good luck to you and stop following me around
(I already have at least one other person taking care of that job 
.... she's so lucky i'm 300 miles away... karma.... oh... )
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oh my, this is so sad and painful. It is
a very emotionally powerful piece of writing,
in only three lines. amazing.
great job with this and good luck in the
contest.
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