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My World's Ways

Colloquial dreams
follow peasant seams
But an unseen deity
blocks casual spontaneity

 

However did you know?

Where it was you were to go?

And how’s it that you knew 

How to get there with no directions?

But perhaps I stand here with

Misguided corrections... 

 

Let me show you my world’s ways

 

A contest entry

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    February 17

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    I love the entire second stanza. It really makes a person think. This is a great write. Keep up the good writing!


  • Ellis gold member
    November 15, 2008
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    Well written


  • creationsfromheart
    February 13, 2008
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    This is good I like it very much so good luck in the contest