She can't see it..the perfectness of all this
Does she not see, I have been imprinted-to her.
she lives for the cold, dead one..
I can not imagine why, when she has a live one right here for her.
She would never have to leave, she could keep all of her friends.
Granted she may not be able have everything handed to her.
She would never have to leave Charlie or her mom, Renee
and she would have all the love of a pack.
Late at night she would not even need a blanket because she could just curl up to me..
the best of all is she would be able to have kids.
Author notes
this is from Jacob's point of view.
option 5
bluexeyedxfailure
A contest entry
- Stephenie Meyer's Based Series Round 2 by LoneFairrie.
525 points, ended February 18, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think, it is in free verse but, that is the way I am.
Comments
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AWE! This was absolutely adorable! I loved it
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I like free verse. You definitely got Jacob's point of view.... It's a decent poem, sweet and sad, but I think it would be better if it had ended with something similar to the beginning – I really liked the first verse. =]
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