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Moving On

 
 
We don't talk
As often anymore
We surely don't talk
like we did before
 
I think about you
every moment, every day
our friendship seems
to be fading away
 
I miss spending days with you
getting lost in time
I miss the days 
that you were mine
 
As time moves on
We drift further apart
Though still as I promised
you'll forever remain in my heart 
 

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  • NeverRegret
    February 15, 2008
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    sry i meant the one lol

  • NeverRegret
    February 15, 2008

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    awww i love it! ive been reading poem after poem trying to find a poem a can relate to in how i feel about an old friend can urs is the big i love it great job


  • Dutch Doll
    February 15, 2008
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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    February 14, 2008

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    It seems just a tad choppy in places (lack of flow) and also the ending could be improved. It seems like it should go on, to me at least! THANK YOU for following the rules though, very nice job!

    (Happy V Day)

    ♥